1. Lead with the experience, not the fixtures
A guest is imagining their stay, not auditing a spec sheet. Open with the feeling — waking to the sea, the morning light through the shutters, the quiet of the garden side — then let the details support it. The first line decides whether they keep reading.
2. Be specific — detail builds trust
Concrete beats generic every time. 'A king bed, a 20 m² terrace facing the vineyard' tells a guest more, and reads as more honest, than 'spacious room with a lovely view'. Specific detail is also what sets your room apart from the identical-sounding listings beside it on an OTA. Put together, a room description reads like this:
Garden Suite — sleeps 2 · king bed · 32 m²
Wake to birdsong on the quiet garden side of the house. The Garden Suite has a king bed under the original beams, a rain shower, and doors that open onto your own shaded terrace. Breakfast on the veranda is included, and the beach is an eight-minute walk through the old town.
3. Answer the guest's real questions
Before they book, a guest wants to know: how many people does it sleep, what's the bed, what's included, and what's nearby. A description that answers those in a glance removes the doubt that otherwise sends them to message you — or to book somewhere clearer.
4. Write for a phone screen
Most guests read your site on a phone, on the move. Short sentences, short paragraphs, and a scannable shape — a strong first line, then the essentials — beat a dense block of prose no one finishes. Say the most important thing first.
5. Pair the words with great photos
Words and photos do the job together: the photo earns the click, the description closes it. Make sure the room the words describe is the room the photos show — a mismatch between the two is what erodes trust and drives cancellations.
Key takeaways
- Open with the experience, not a list of fixtures.
- Be specific — real bed, real view, real size beat vague adjectives.
- Answer occupancy, what's included, and what's nearby up front.
- Write short and scannable, for a phone screen.
- Make sure the words and the photos describe the same room.
Related questions
- How long should a room description be?
- Short enough to read on a phone in a few seconds, long enough to answer the guest's real questions — usually a strong opening line and two or three short lines of specifics. If a sentence doesn't help a guest decide, cut it.
- Should every room have a different description?
- Yes — the differences are the point. If two rooms read identically, a guest can't tell why one costs more, so give each its own real details: the view, the size, the bed, what makes it worth choosing.
- Do room descriptions help with search?
- Genuine, specific descriptions help guests decide and give search engines real content to index — but write them for the guest first. Copy written to please a search engine reads as such and converts worse.
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